I don't get comments and commenters like this. [0]
It's unquestionably an "improvement"
over the original, provided we measure that by the amount of information provided, which is the obvious way to measure it for every normal human being.
Yes, the author is very clearly dancing around something. No, nobody here knows why either. No, they don't have a damn concussion, and their post really isn't a difficult read at all.
Your ideas about NDAs are speculative (according to yourself). Why are you taking them at face value?
[0] But maybe this is just my variation on when people in YouTube comment sections get mad at each other for quoting the zingers from the corresponding videos, so eh...